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Unread Dec 7th, 2004, 07:09 PM   #1
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lil help

i did this pic a long time ago an i really like the first pose,could anyone do some redline for me an help me make them better? ^.^

http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs4/i/2004...lushiePaws.jpg
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Unread Dec 8th, 2004, 06:25 PM   #2
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Really, I can't see critiquing old work of yours being all that helpful to you. Is there something recent that you could put up here?
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Unread Dec 8th, 2004, 07:25 PM   #3
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I think they mean it's an old pic they did that they like and want to redo but they want a basic idea of what to improve this time around? (Was that even a question?)

Make sure to look at legs as a composite of a number of bones and joints, not just as a flowy structure to stand on. Should be able to see the correct number of joints. I couldn't tell you the number of joints in a wolf leg, sorry. Some of it is covered in fur and muscle, yes, but you should be able to tell that there is form underneath.

http://www.exzooberance.com/virtual%...lf%2042075.jpg (hind legs)
http://www.photo.net/photo/pcd1641/wolf-17.4.jpg (forelegs)
http://www.arctic.noaa.gov/images/Wolf/mech_05.jpg (fore legs)
http://www.arctic.noaa.gov/images/Wolf/mech_14.jpg (arctic wolf forelegs)
http://www.greenapple.com/~jorp/amzanim/eth-wolf.jpg (Ethiopean wolf- see head position of middle one)
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Unread Dec 8th, 2004, 08:34 PM   #4
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yea,just wanted to fix that pic a lil,maybe as a tattoo design for when i get more $ to go to the shop ^.^heh,anyways heres a newer pic http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/12578992/ i think the face is pretty good,what does everyone else think?
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