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Unread Sep 15th, 2002, 11:14 AM   #1
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*Needs anthro anatomy help*

Is my anatomy right? proportions? arm/leg length?

Eh heh . . . redlines, anyone?
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Unread Sep 15th, 2002, 12:46 PM   #2
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Thats actually very good! Well done!
I can only spot a few little mistakes, if it is at all!
Everythings fine, you seem to have the clothes sorted out and the hair is gorgous!
You might want to make her waist a little more elegant and slender if you want to make her look more femine.
The tail could be slightly longer...overall thats very good! Pretty! ^^,
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Unread Sep 15th, 2002, 05:45 PM   #3
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Hey there--

It looks great, but the legs could be longer and slimmer. I draw wolves/dogs but I don't practise anthros often. Unfortunately I can't do clothing well therefore can't do a redline, sorry ^^;
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Unread Sep 15th, 2002, 10:21 PM   #4
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I think the picture is great and very nicely done , but here is what I think you should change =)...


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Unread Sep 16th, 2002, 11:10 AM   #5
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Well, that is a good picture, may I point out a few things?

yes, the thighs shoud be a bit skinnier, and the torso, that needs to be a bit longer, and seems this is a female, make the hips a bit more pronounced =3
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