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Unread Aug 3rd, 2003, 09:15 PM   #1
Winds_of_Fate
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A little bit of help...?

I was wondering if anyone can give me tips on the wings on this pegasus. Somthing looks wrong to me, but I can't pin it down. Also, does the aliacorn look too long? If theres any other problems you see, PLEASE mention them! I'll be very greatfull if someone would give me some tips!
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Unread Aug 3rd, 2003, 09:21 PM   #2
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Woah, where did my link go?? Here it is ! (I do hope this works!)

http://groups.msn.com/TheCimarronHer...to&PhotoID=329
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Unread Aug 3rd, 2003, 09:45 PM   #3
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Too lazy to redline...and it probably wouldn't turn out all that helpful anyway.

But I do have a picture that may be of some help. I know it helped me.

The horn should be more centered on the head...horns are uber hard to foreshorten, though, so...

At that angle the back legs should be much higher up than the front legs.

*sigh* pic won't attach. *tries again*

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Unread Aug 3rd, 2003, 09:47 PM   #4
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At the moment you've placed the horn on the ridge of the eye it needs to be placed further to the right
For the wings, you should take a peek as some bird wings for reference They need to have a joint, simular to an elbow joint in them

charming pic I know but it may help
http://www.conservation.state.mo.us/...oves/dove3.jpg
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Unread Aug 4th, 2003, 07:27 AM   #5
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Winds of fate, your link seems to be broken. Could you try to attach the pic to your post, like Mishi did?

And those are reeeally good ref pics..I'm gonna save them to my hard drive.
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