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Unread Mar 1st, 2002, 01:18 PM   #1
Bronwyn
 
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*EEEE* o.O Human type thingy

Ok..my second attempt at a human...anime style...well kinda...I'm shocked myself...the hair could use some work....

Ok Fire away all!!! I need all the help I can get!


P.S. Tis Hilda...the evil mother in my fanfic The Long Journey Home....:tongue2:


*Edit* EeEeEppp!! hehe just noticed the chin is a little "wobbly" .....darn mouse... rollin
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Unread Mar 2nd, 2002, 11:21 AM   #2
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Ok..I don't pretend to be an expert in humans at all..and I cannot draw them face on..but I've taken your pic..which is very cool BTW..and drawn in a couple of ways you could improve the image. It's a great pic..I really like it..but just two tiny little things. Firstly, the hair. It could probably look better if you drew in sort of, big hair chunks..if you know what I mean..and then fill in the different hair colours..see attachment..I've drawn in how you could show the hair. And the chin is a bit wide and rounded..anime chins, although I am no expert in the field, are more pointed. ..I also tried something with the nose..but you can ignore that.

Hope that helped a bit..can't wait to see more of your cool work! *cling*
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Unread Mar 3rd, 2002, 01:18 PM   #3
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ok...I had time to work on it a bit ....I defenatly like the hair better this way...the chin still needs work....mabye I'll fiddle around with it tonight...
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