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Unread May 11th, 2006, 09:48 PM   #1
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Need an opinion/redline please?

Okay. This will eventually be a larger picture, with a full body, but I just want to make sure I got his face right x_x I'm teh suck when it comes to drawing canon characters.

Simba:

Does it really look like him? And what can I change/improve? I'm doing this all with my tablet so bear with me xD Thanks to anyone who helps!

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Okay, I did his body too, it's kinda sketchy 'cause yeah. But he's supposed to look a little.. worried and sad. Okay, I'm drawing it to the general idea of the song "Endless Night" It's been in my head all day.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...i/simbajpg.jpg [I put the link since it's kinda big] NOTE: Ignore the random mark in his head area o_O It was on another layer and yeah. Don't mind it.

Thanks to anyone who can help with the anatomy and whatnot!
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Unread May 12th, 2006, 04:19 PM   #2
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THe only thing i see wrong is the eyes look a bit crossed. You should probabily move the pupil more in the middle of the eye.
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Unread May 12th, 2006, 04:25 PM   #3
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Take a peek at these:


http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y13...roundModel.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y13...aHeadModel.jpg
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Unread May 12th, 2006, 04:51 PM   #4
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Thanks you two ^^

I am honestly thrilled with how this image came along. I sorta couldn't help but finish it up x) His eyes are crossed because he's looking like.. up at one point, basically, the sky ; Thanks!
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