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Unread May 23rd, 2006, 06:03 PM   #1
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Please be honest and blunt..

...you won't hurt my feelings in doing so. This is my first picture, I drew a while back. I can't remember if I showed it here before or not. But, anyway I just uploaded it to TLKFAA in the past few days and here it is: http://fanart.lionking.org/Artists/l...am/Picture.jpg
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Unread May 23rd, 2006, 06:28 PM   #2
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I think you've got a good picture here. First of all, I love the sense of turmoil and indecision that the piece offers. Priderock on one side, the Outlands on the other. Kovu, obviously, is undecided to which his loyalty truly lies. I would love to see it colored sometime. The anatomy could use a little bit of work (Mine needs it too so I'm not the pot calling the kettle black. Lol), but other than that, I think it's great. You should be proud of it.
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Unread May 23rd, 2006, 07:07 PM   #3
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If you crop and scan on a less high contrast I think you'd be happier with the outcome of how it looks digitally.

I just cropped, shrunk it down a little and added a little border and it makes a more finished pic.

http://www.phalafala.org/personal/Picture.jpg
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Unread May 23rd, 2006, 07:41 PM   #4
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Just some ideas and such so really don't mind me. X3

Well, maybe you should draw in the middle a river or something?
And for Kovu's hair tuff - maybe more in the middle instead of parted to the side?
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Unread May 24th, 2006, 05:34 PM   #5
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If you crop and scan on a less high contrast I think you'd be happier with the outcome of how it looks digitally.

I just cropped, shrunk it down a little and added a little border and it makes a more finished pic.

http://www.phalafala.org/personal/Picture.jpg


That does look a whole lot better smaller and with a boarder. Is there a way to change the size without having to upload it again? I think the boarder adds a nice touch. I am thinking of attempting a few more pics before I do a second draft of this one though. Thank you....

@ everyone: Thanks for the suggestions...
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Unread May 24th, 2006, 05:55 PM   #6
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On lionking.org if you go to 'edit images' you can just replace the image you have there with a different version.
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