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Unread May 31st, 2006, 12:54 PM   #1
Dille
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Luxord Redline?

This picture may not have a major problem, but I need to hear it from other people. I'm trying to 'lionize' Luxord from KH2 for that one project further down the board. I chose Luxord, and now it seems like his head is gigantic and his butt is tiny. Am I just crazy? Heeeelp meeeeeeh! x_x



Thanks for your help, peoples. I'm finished now, hope he's not too....off.

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Unread May 31st, 2006, 01:12 PM   #2
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i think maybe you move his arse down a lil bit so his back legs were slightly more paralelle to his front paw....but thats just my opinion
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Unread May 31st, 2006, 01:14 PM   #3
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i think maybe you move his arse down a lil bit so his back legs were slightly more paralelle to his front paw....but thats just my opinion

Okies, I really need to have other people look at my stuff, my eyes start to cross after a while. x_x
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Unread May 31st, 2006, 01:19 PM   #4
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lol fair enough but personally ur drawing is awesome so no need to sweat!
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Unread Jun 1st, 2006, 05:02 AM   #5
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Head is in fact not too big, looking at the size of the shoulders and forelegs. It's that you made the neck too thin imo.

The character doesn't seem to be especially stocky so I think the forelegs are a bit too thick, too.
Take a look at my redline, perhaps it's of some help.

I have to compliment you on the brilliant facial expression though.
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Unread Jun 1st, 2006, 05:23 AM   #6
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Woah, thank'ye Pinali. XP I admit I have a huge problem with making lion legs waaaaay too long in the front, (a side effect of having drawn canines for so dang long,) and giving them teeny butts. *dies* It's too late for his front leg, but thanks for the help with his bum.
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