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Unread Dec 9th, 2006, 04:02 AM   #1
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A horse in need of red lines

I really really need help on that pic. I wanted to draw something new with horses so I draw that, but I'm completly lost with anatomy *sight*

Can anyone help me ?

Thankies !

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Unread Dec 9th, 2006, 04:31 AM   #2
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It's a pegasus?
If so the first thing I notice is that the wings shouldn't be placed vertically down its sides like that, they should go horizontally along the back. I can't really redline it to show what I mean because I'm not at my flat, thus I have no tablet/Photoshop.
And I won't point out anything else because I don't know anything about horses so will leave the horse anatomy to an expert.
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Unread Dec 9th, 2006, 08:12 AM   #3
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It's a pegasus?
If so the first thing I notice is that the wings shouldn't be placed vertically down its sides like that, they should go horizontally along the back. I can't really redline it to show what I mean because I'm not at my flat, thus I have no tablet/Photoshop.
And I won't point out anything else because I don't know anything about horses so will leave the horse anatomy to an expert.

Sorry, yes it's a pegasus.

Aww well never tought that about the wings. Thankies so much. I'll try to fix that
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Unread Dec 9th, 2006, 12:09 PM   #4
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HORSEY HORSEY HORSEY!!! *spazzes* I shall take a look for you 83


EDIT: i forgot the S in the first horsey XD
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Unread Dec 9th, 2006, 12:12 PM   #5
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Maz luffs to redline horseys XD I wish i could help but I'm no good on their anatomy. I agree with pinali about the wings tho, not that it helps! XD
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Unread Dec 9th, 2006, 12:30 PM   #6
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Well i luff horseys 83
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Unread Dec 9th, 2006, 01:01 PM   #7
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Hmm... I attempted to help XD I'm still having a bad art block and im finding it pretty hard to draw anything or even redline stuff XD so well... here goes =S

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Unread Dec 10th, 2006, 01:39 AM   #8
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OMG Wow 0.0 I really don't know what to say... this is amazing Maz. Thank you so so much :hug: I'm defnitly gonna work with photo references by now, and try to learn harder horses anatomy. *goes of to fix her sketch*

I'll show you the finisned picture.

Thanks also to Pinali and phoenixgigs ^_______^
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Unread Dec 10th, 2006, 01:58 PM   #9
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You're very welcome BS ^^ I just tried to work the anatomy out from what i learnt by being around the beasts pretty much all my life, and i felt i had to get the legs in positions that looked anatomically convincing, in a very roughish way... *is making no sense* Weeeeeeeee I need a bath... *smells like horses and is covered in mud from being at the stabled and riding out on the horses* XD
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Unread Jan 2nd, 2007, 06:41 AM   #10
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Here is the final pic ! A big thanks to all of you *hugs*

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Very pretty, good job! ^^
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Unread Jan 3rd, 2007, 12:59 AM   #12
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Thankies Pinali :3
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