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Unread Aug 5th, 2007, 10:55 PM   #1
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"What's wrong with it?" The anatomy is completely covered in fail sauce...

I need help.
I'm having trouble with the anatomy of lions. It's the kind of situation where I just know there's something wrong with my picture, but I have no clue how to fix it.

I tend to have the most problems with the belly and the back legs. And I REALLY can't draw cubs to save my life.

Here are some examples:

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/61557257/

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/61557684/

If someone could tell me what's wrong with these pictures(know that they are very rough sketches), and give me some advice, then that would be very helpful.

Thanks!
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Unread Aug 8th, 2007, 11:59 AM   #2
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First picture: just the front leg looks a little too wide; all I have to say for the second picture, it looks a little stocky, you might want to lengthen the legs. Otherwise great job
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Unread Aug 8th, 2007, 12:26 PM   #3
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lion cubs have short stocky legs, they dont need lengthened, though your legs could be skinnier.

soo..something like this >.o not my best redlines lol
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/7641/redlinewz1.jpg
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/3059/redline2mj5.jpg

imageshacks being a butt :|
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Unread Aug 8th, 2007, 04:57 PM   #4
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Oh, thank you very much!
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