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Unread Oct 17th, 2002, 08:45 AM   #1
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*sniff* Yerf wont except headshots...dern!!!

Here is a headshot I am working on....

http://geocities.com/snowtail_wolf/wolfysketch.jpg

And, Yerf is pretty much right to not except headshots, because their isn't really much you can do with a headshot. But, I would like to work on faces before moving on to getting anatomy correct.

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Unread Oct 17th, 2002, 09:49 AM   #2
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Hang on.....I edited it.
Pencil is hard to scan....

http://www.geocities.com/wolfgirl131/wolfysketch2.jpg

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Unread Oct 17th, 2002, 03:12 PM   #3
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This is not the place to insult Yerf- do that in a LiveJournal. It's true that there isn't much to crit with a head-shot, and it would be more useful if you'd of submitted a full-body picture. They have absolutly no obligation to critique your art; you are not paying for their services and they owe you nothing. In fact, you owe them. I frequent Yerf, and I've seen that they've given you lots of really good advice that I've already seen you put to use. Don't insult something that's already been of worth to you.

Now then, the picture. It's a definate improvement from your earlier stuff! The eyes are spaced correctly- something you had trouble with before. (It's also nice to see you using construction lines! ) The muzzle, however, isn't symetrical. One lip goes down further than the other..and this is very easy to correct! The one on the viewer's left needs to be moved up a tad. Also, the nostrils are too big and too high. Don't put pupils directly in the center of the eye; have the top of the pupil touch the top of the eye. Right now it looks like he just saw a caribou do a backflip.

It's a great improvement on your past drawings though; keep it up!
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Unread Oct 18th, 2002, 06:16 PM   #4
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Okay, I'm sorry; I was just frustrated, because I really wanted crit on thia one.

LOL, it does look like he just saw a caribou did a backflip!!! I'll fix that. Thanks for the comments!!
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