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Unread May 9th, 2006, 05:01 PM   #1
SafiMoyo
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Two Character Sketch

Can I have some redlines (or maybe some other color since one of them is already red XD) please? Or some tips at least?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...ulpix/Pict.jpg
(Sorry the picture is somewhat big)

I like how it's coming out, but there are some little things about it that make me feel uncomfortable.
The paws feel... wrong to me. The bottom half of the male is... Heh, I have no idea how to draw that, so it might be totally wrong XD The back legs on the female.. I think they're a little small...

So I'd love advice on anything! Once I get an input or two I'll edit the picture and then post it again and repeat that until I feel really comfortable with it So please help me <3
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Unread May 10th, 2006, 07:45 PM   #2
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Bumpage?
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Unread May 10th, 2006, 08:16 PM   #3
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Hey thats actually really good! I like it a lot. My only crits would be on the blue one's feet being a tad too small and the arm that extends seems a little awkward to me. Not sure however how you can fix it. Im sorry if I was very helpful but I do really like the picture a lot.
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