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Unread May 14th, 2006, 11:17 AM   #1
Nightingalle
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Nala Redline Please

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...nalashadow.jpg

>.< Mainly it's the anatomy I'm annoyed with. It's decent, but not 'Nala'ish. I would like a redline please >_< I've got tons of pictures of Nala, it's just not working out >_< It'd be great if someone could help me.
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Unread May 14th, 2006, 12:03 PM   #2
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Needs more length, mostly. Nala is quite long, like a low rectangle (all of the TLK lions are, but you mostly see them in perspective so it's harder to tell).
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Unread May 14th, 2006, 12:35 PM   #3
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It's just hard for me to see it in my head. ::works on the picture some more :: >_<
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Unread May 14th, 2006, 12:38 PM   #4
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Wow--Nala's face looks fantastic.
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Unread May 14th, 2006, 02:16 PM   #5
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Thanks Estrial.

I made her body longer but... eh >_< http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...alashadow1.jpg

I would still greatly appreciate a red-line ; ::rolls over::
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Unread May 14th, 2006, 02:51 PM   #6
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The face looks so nice, especially the eyes. Only thing is you might want to bring the muzzle a wee bit longer. I think she has a stubbier Sarabi face right now. (Could be just the half lidded eyes)

The head is so nice but it seems too big for the body. I tried to figure out a pose for her. I know it's not perfect but you might want to try something similar, instead of trying to stretch out a big long slinky Nala body to fit the head.

*L* My red line could probably use a red line but it was like just a suggestion.

That scene where they do the 'You're starting to sound like my father!' is a good ref scene for Nala face on and sort of 3/4 on.
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Unread May 14th, 2006, 02:54 PM   #7
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Ahhh, thank you EN ^^ This is going to be a 'Shadowlands' themed picture x) It's also going to go with the simba on my background eventually.



I edited her face som, made the eyes less Sarabi like, but I haven't gone on to the body just yet. ::nod:: I like your change of direction of the body, that perspective will work much better. I'll go fiddle around with it :3 Thanks!
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